This poem,a metaphorical love triangle is written by one of my best buddies at school Jai. In fact it was him who introduced me to writing in the first place. Loved his writings then. Love his writings now.
Like The Sunflower
A flower was born from the barren skies above,
Life was her colour and smile was her scent,
She was a gift for the land of love,
That the selfish god had so reluctantly sent.
The droning bee was created one day
He was thirsty but couldn't drink water
"How should i live" to god he prayed
"Go to the flower" replied almighty creator
And so to the flower he went
"I'm the bee that god has sent"
She asked the bee "will you be my friend
That the selfish god had promised to send"
Thus friends they became forever
And this friendship created nectar
That gave life to bee and the flower
And made sure they remained together
The sun was there all along
And his story ran from dusk to dawn
As he was infatuated to the lovely moon
But this was going to change very soon
The moon shone alike for all the stars
With cool glow she reflected his heat
And the sun's feelings slowly vapourized
"I too am a star" the sun finally realized.
So to days he turned from the night
And saw the flower in his own light
At this age as naturally as one might
He fell in love, again, at first sight.
Flower gradually found all her bee friends boring
And looked at the skies one pretty morning
To find the sun who was looking cute and adoring
And since, with each other, they started gossiping
From sunrise to sunset they faced each other
Their private chatting seemed to end never
Her name was changed by someone very clever
And thus she became the pretty SUNFLOWER
The sun ignored the planets and the flower ignored the bees
They were seen alone at hilltops, they were seen near the seas.
The bees found other gardens the planets didn't stop revolving
The sun's light was fading and the flower's fragnance dissolving
Still ignorant of the world around
Love sweet love they had found
Until one day so hot the sun became
That it paused this lovely game
This growing heat scared the flower
But as she was now the sunflower
She couldn't turn away from this fiery fellow
And her colour of life faded to a dusty yellow
And this story continues forever
Bees like the sun and the flower
But they never search for nectar
From the yellow sunflower.
Written by Jai Singh Kshatri
11 comments:
the poem is fantastic.... :-)
I suppose we all hv our inspiration for writing :-)
Hey !
the luv triangle is too GUD !
so simple.. yet said so many things..
#saint... why dnt u remove d word-verification..its borin to fill it up !
beautiful beautiful pic, along with a touching verse!
Keshi.
awesoem read!!!
the flow n depiction of bee,sun , flower are great
triangle ouuta something like this
waoo
nice... and the metaphors are awesome...
however coz I have read Spenser and all, i don't like long poems...but still i read it ol'...
Hmmm wittingly written I enjoyed it.
wow....dat was a beautiful poem! hats off to ur frend:)
Beautifully written! :)
Cheers. ^_^
whoa that poem's really something good! I usually never comment but hey, here i am. haha. does this friend of yours happen to blog?
tht was really beautiful.. movin... poetry..
fantastic!!! its so simple and so spongy ... it absorbs u in the story :)
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