As I look at the vast blue sky
Sitting by the sea
Pondering over why everything
Is wrong with me
I look at the splendid white birds
Gliding over the sky
I wish I was one of them
And have the world to fly
Out of nowhere, a bird came
And sat by me
Bathed in the white moonlight
Oh! What a beauty
But why the pain in its eyes
I look at its legs, blood oozing out
But neither did it scream
Nor did it shout
Strangely I could hear it say
“Boy, with us, you want to fly
But you must know the darkness behind the sun
Before you should try
The dawn doesnt come twice to awaken us
Still, we fly miles from distant lands
To feed our hungry mouths
On these alien waters and these scorching sands
We risk our lives everyday
And then, everyday we begin
You just see the beauty
But everything beautiful is marred from within
But we never show the world our pains
For them, we just fly, sing and hum
Just try to be happy
And see how happy the world becomes
With these wise words
The bird flew away with glee
As I sat on the beach
Pondering over why everything is wrong with me
Sitting by the sea
Pondering over why everything
Is wrong with me
I look at the splendid white birds
Gliding over the sky
I wish I was one of them
And have the world to fly
Out of nowhere, a bird came
And sat by me
Bathed in the white moonlight
Oh! What a beauty
But why the pain in its eyes
I look at its legs, blood oozing out
But neither did it scream
Nor did it shout
Strangely I could hear it say
“Boy, with us, you want to fly
But you must know the darkness behind the sun
Before you should try
The dawn doesnt come twice to awaken us
Still, we fly miles from distant lands
To feed our hungry mouths
On these alien waters and these scorching sands
We risk our lives everyday
And then, everyday we begin
You just see the beauty
But everything beautiful is marred from within
But we never show the world our pains
For them, we just fly, sing and hum
Just try to be happy
And see how happy the world becomes
With these wise words
The bird flew away with glee
As I sat on the beach
Pondering over why everything is wrong with me
15 comments:
"As I sat on the beach
Pondering over why everything is wrong with me"
Luvd ur last lines.
I must tell you, your writings are very smooth, i.e. they seem to merge with each other...bt I lik it :)
awesome expression!!!!
But we never show the world our pains
For them, we just fly, sing and hum
Just try to be happy
And see how happy the world becomes
i guess, we should be this!
and yu did this by posting such a beautiful piece here.. lovely!
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You just see the beauty
But everything beautiful is marred from within
True...very truE
Loved the poem...has a rare message in it...
And if I sit and talk about the sea, it'l take me days...but I have felt almost everything you have written about it...
I have, always drenched my feet in its waters...waiting for its waves to wash all my sorrow away...what sorrow, i dun know...!
Amazing poem....gr8 writing..:-)
How true with beautiful things comes pain too.
@ debasish
hey thnx dude...
@ neha
:)
@ veens
i wish we cld be this...
@ we the people
hey its one of my fave book's title...
and thnk u so much for inviting me...
@ wildflower
thnx...and yeah, u from the beach town, isnt it??? so its natural...
and i am originally from there too...
@ nits
yeah..its a bitter truth...
yeah a simple poem but with a lot of truth in em...
beautiful!
PS: mind if i blogroll u, i really enjoyed ur guest post on neha's blog too
heyaa
nice read !!!
btw loved ur post on d sinner's blog awesome
:)
cheers
Nice way of putting things.
I too love the beach.. just sitting there with my toes digging into the sand.. the ocean sliding over me.. taking me in.. the joy the freedom I feel is beyond words..
loved your space.. have blogrolled you
i loved the poem...
///You just see the beauty
But everything beautiful is marred from within///
very true! :)
@ vandita
thnx and ofcrse i wld nt mind...hehe...its like asking if i mind when someone gives me a treat...
@ aditi
hey thnx...
@ mez
:)
@ freesherry
yeah...the sea holds a very special place in my heart...i have felt happiness, anger, loneliness, desperation all by the sea sometimes...
@ pri
thnx...and yeah thats true...
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